Crystal Shadow

“Listen to her, Seth.” The man speaking, burly and muscular in posture, had a girlish almost voice. His glinting underneath oily black hairr eyes showed cunning intelligence. “Listen to her ...

Are they giving you a hard time? They're just trying to help. Calm down (I'm not here to comment on the "u" or anything) and cut some slack on the ...

If that was the end of this story then it wasn't a very good one. I think it ended a little too soon and either I'm very tired or it ...

Ummmm... I think I'm having trouble understanding. It's a well written piece that seems to be composed of three different stories that have no known connection so far. I get ...

Ok, sounds good. This story has potential. Please stick to the balance of good and evil thing becuase, though the balance isn't perfect, it is important. Don't listen to the ...

Lots of mistakes. I want to know what this has to do with Archangels (which is one word, not two). To tell you the truth, there are only five Archangels ...

The Speakers of the Forum's giving you a hard time? Don't worry about it, it is your story after all. Though it does need corrections it's pretty good. What it ...

I like the beginning, but I would like to point out two things: 1) If they aren't men then why are they continuely called men? 2) Last time I checked, ...